语义重复典型错误分析

　　1. 你们应当把你们的物品保管好。

　　误:You should take good care of your things carefully.

　　正:You should take good care of your things.

　　析:take good care of有“认真保管好”之意,后面不可再用副词carefully。

　　2. 只要老师一回来,我们就立刻告诉你。

　　误:I will let you know as soon as the teacher comes back at once.

　　正:I will let you know as soon as the teacher comes back.

　　析:as soon as 有“立刻”之意,从句中用了as soon as,主句中就不能再用at once, immediately, right away, right now等词了。

　　3. 我们不知道David什么时候回来。

　　误:We don’t know when David will return back.

　　正:We don’t know when David will return. 或We don’t know when David will come / be back.

　　析:return有come back或go back的意思,return之后不能再用副词back。

　　4. 我们希望你们俩明天上午都能来。

　　误:We hope that both you two could come tomorrow morning.

　　正:We hope that you two could come tomorrow morning. 或 We hope that both of you could come tomorrow morning.

　　析:both与two都指“两个”,不可同时使用。

　　5. 他们还没有完成这项工作。

　　误:They still haven’t finished the job yet.

　　正:They still haven’t finished the job. 或 They haven’t finished the job yet.

　　析:still和yet都可用于否定句中,表示“还,仍然”之意,但不可用于同一句中,still一般位于表示否定的助动词前,yet用于否定句末。

　　6. 大家都非常喜欢这个小女孩。

　　误:Everybody all likes the little girl very much.

　　正:Everybody likes the little girl very much. 或 All of us like the little girl very much.

　　析:everyone有“每个人,大家”的意思,用了everyone或everybody就不必再用all了。

　　7. 这个男孩名叫张鹏。

　　误:The name of the boy is called Zhang Peng.

　　正:The name of the boy is Zhang Peng. 或 The boy is called Zhang Peng.

　　析:name与be called不能同时使用,因为name 和be called在语义上是重复的。我们通常说 My name is Harry,但不能说 My name is called Harry。

　　8. 请把这个句子再重复一遍。

　　误:Please repeat the sentence again.

　　正:Please repeat the sentence. 或 Please say the sentence again.

　　析:repeat本身有 say or do sth. again之意,用了repeat,就不必再用again了,但可说say it again。

　　9. 战争结束以后,他成了一名医生。

　　误:After the end of the war, he became a doctor.

　　正:After the war, he became a doctor.

　　析:句中after是介词,是“在……以后”的意思;end是名词,意思是“结束”,用了after,就不可再用end。

　　10. 咱们步行去电影院好吗?

　　误:Shall we walk to the cinema on foot?

　　正:Shall we walk to the cinema? 或 Shall we go to the cinema on foot?

　　析:walk 本身有“步行(go on foot)”之意,用了walk,就不可再用on foot了。

　　11. 你喜欢米饭还是喜欢面包?

　　误:Which do you prefer more, rice or bread?

　　正:Which do you prefer, rice or bread? 或 Which do you like better, rice or bread?

　　析:prefer本身有“较喜欢(like better)”之意,用了prefer,就不再用 more了。

　　12. 他们吃完早饭急急忙忙去上班。

　　误:After breakfast they hurried to go to work.

　　正:After breakfast they hurried to work.

　　析:hurry(=move quickly)本身含有“走”之意,后面不可接go, walk, run之类的动词,但可接其它动词不定式或名词。如:We have to hurry away to catch the bus. / She hurried to the station.

　　13. 打篮球是Tom最喜爱的运动。

　　误:Playing basketball is Tom’s most favorite sport.

　　正:Playing basketball is Tom’s favorite sport.

　　析:favorite本身有“最喜爱(like best)”之意,前面不必再用most修饰了。又如:Jenny’s favorite color is red.

　　14. 这台电脑多少钱?

　　误:How much is the price of the computer?

　　正:What is the price of the computer? 或What price is the computer?或How much is the computer?

　　析:问“某物是多少钱”,how much和price不能在同一句中出现。

　　15. 当老师走进教室时,学生们不再说话了。

　　误:Students stopped talking when the teacher entered into the classroom.

　　正:Students stopped talking when the teacher entered the classroom.或Students stopped talking when the teacher walked into the classroom.

　　析:enter当“进入”讲时是及物动词,有come /go into的意思,不可与介词into 连用。

分享到：